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PostSubject: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-07, 13:52


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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-07, 15:45

Kya baat hai King u r really mindblowing yaar...........

Kya likha hai..............really no words............

"Apne armaano ko tum aaj bahk jaane do,
Jo kabhi hua nahi wo bhi gujar jaane do,
Mera pyaase labon ko choo le tu jara,
Aaj enko bhi apne rang me rang jaane do,
Mujhe es pyaar ki barsaat me bheeg jaane do......................
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-07, 15:50

very nice yaar tu to flawless likh raha he yar~~~~
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-07, 15:53

thx abhi.............thx tuli mam
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-30, 18:57





iss barish ko taras gaye hum
teri baahon ki garmahat ko tadap gaye hum
jab seh na sake iss pyaase dil ki bechaini
iss tanha raat mein khud mein simatkar so gaye hum


khamosh raatein yun hi beet gai hain kai
ab to koi kehne sunne wala bhi nahin
main to ab ho chuki hun sada ko maun
ab to ye dil bhi kuch humse kehta nahin

kaash k ye barsatein fir se aa jati.n
main tumme fir iss kadar kho jati
bunti rehti hun main unn lamhon ki chaadar
jisme tere jism ki mehak sama jati

aaj fir yunhi so jaungi tanha akeli
aaj fir ye sukhi ankahi bojhal raat dhul jayegi
kaash aa jaye tu fir kahin se ek baar
aur gale lagake kehde

aaj hume iss barsaat mein bheeg jane de........
aaj hamare pyaar ko jeet jane de...........



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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-30, 23:31

King awesome man , Nicely written, its really wet eyes by tears,
As always tuliji written awesome...

And My new Dost AnAmika ...Nicely design and nicely composed yaar .Wonderfull

I am trying few lines for my dear

Apne ashko ko meri yaad me bah jane de
Na rok inhe , inhe meri yaad mitane de,

Kai janmo se is dil ki jameen banjar hai,
Iss pe apke ashko se bagiya basane de.

Inn asko ki brish me mujh ko bhigg jaane de
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-30, 23:40


Very nice Ajay

Good attempt yaar
achchha likha hai .............

"Na Rok enhen aaj to bah jaane de,
Hain ye barson se barasne ko tarse !!"
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-08-31, 00:54

thnx ajay.....and beautiful lines.......
Apne ashko ko meri yaad me bah jane de
Na rok inhe , inhe meri yaad mitane de,


Kai janmo se is dil ki jameen banjar hai,
Iss pe apke ashko se bagiya basane de.

Inn asko ki brish me mujh ko bhigg jaane de
aaj ro lene de mujhko aur tujhe rulane de

apne pyar ka izhaar yun mujhko aaj karne de
tere ashk mujhe apni aankhon mein sajane de

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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-09-03, 16:26

ajjax dear~~~ nice... anu ji nice.....tuli di... evergreen~~~

arz kiya he zalim~~~~

peekar ye jaam alam madhoshi me dhakne de
aaj na rok mujhe saki machalne de behekne de~~~
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-09-03, 17:03

iske aage ka haal bhi suniye abhi ji..............

aaj na rok mujhe machalne de bahekne de
aaj yunhi tere sath mujhe jalne de tadapne de
main mar na jaun kahin tujhse duri k dar se
aaj mujhe teri baahon me puri tarah jee lene de..!!!

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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-09-04, 16:22

adhoori he anu ji~~~

aaj mujhe teri baahon me puri tarah jee lene de
chhod sara jahan pankh khol udne de udne de~~~
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PostSubject: Re: !! Muje Bhig Jane De!!   2008-09-04, 17:01

wowwwww........thnx for completing........abhi

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